Very pretty, but the dress is a hanfu, not a kimono. Kimonos are japanese. I will say that I've never seen anyone come as close to the movie using more natural looking fabrics. I just wish they had drawn her wedding hanfu with more ornament, as is more typical of wealthier families. (Mulan was the daughter of a wealthy and famous military man, so her ornament would have been VERY elaborate.)
Maybe I should draw Mulan traditionally, and we could collaborate.